Tauryn's Narrative

Goldilocks and the three bears

It was a sunny day and the three bears were devastated! “We’ve got to get revenge on that little brat” groaned Mother Bear angrily. “Son! Go spy on Goldilocks” Straight away Little Bear ran out of their house and scooted into the woods.

After a long look Little Bear spotted Goldilocks coming out of a tall house and leaving it unlocked. “I shall tell Mum and Dad about her home.” When Little Bear got back he told Mother and Father Bear about how he saw Goldilocks leaving her house unlocked. “Good boy! Now, you show us where she lives, cause its time to pay her a visit.” So the other two bears followed Little Bear in the woods to Goldilocks’ house. Little Bear was right, Goldilocks did leave her house unlock so the bears walked right in.

The first room they went into was the kitchen and Father Bear opened a cupboard with cereal in it. “What’s this? Is it some kind of porridge?” he said gathering the other two bears. He gave each of them a box; they all stuffed a handful full of cereal into their mouths. “This porridge is too dry” said Mother Bear with a box of Weet Bix. “This porridge is too crunchy.” Said Father Bear with a box of Cornflakes. And Little Bear with a box of Cocopops said “This porridge is just right, for a food fight!” Little Bear started throwing cereal everywhere. Stepping back, Father Bear bumped the fridge door open and spilled a milk bottle on the floor. The milk spread on the floor and Father Bear slipped over. Mother Bear opened the cupboards and emptied them out, a bottle of fizzy dropped to the floor and curious Little Bear walked up to the foaming bottle “Uh-oh!” he said. BOOM! The bottle burst and everyone was soaked. “Great! I was wearing my favourite gown” mumbled Mother Bear “Maybe we should move on”

The next room they went into was the lounge “Hey what a weird chair!” said Little Bear climbing onto the high chair. CRASH! The high chair broke and bumped a remote that was lying on the high chair, the on button went on and the volume was on full “NOW COMING UP!” the TV said. Suddenly the three bears ran out of the room, bumping into things and leaving foot marks from the soda explosion.They ran upstairs and into the bathroom, the noise was fainter there. “Yuk! We’re all sticky.”  Said Father Bear looking at the bath. He turned a tap on and water sprayed everywhere. “OUCH! This water is too hot!” yelped Little Bear, Father Bear turned the tap off and Mother Bear turned the sink tap on “BRRRR! This water is too cold!” complained Little Bear, so Mother Bear and Father Bear turned the taps on at the same time and as far as they could go. Steam was made from the collision of hot and cold water, “Ahhh, much better” But then the sink and bath over flowed “RUN!” screamed Mother Bear and they ran out and into a bedroom. 

They all leaped on the bed SPROING! The bed springs broke and they had to use the pillows as a mattress but eventually they popped and feathers flew everywhere.After a long rest they heard footsteps “SHHH, its Goldilocks.” Whispered Father Bear. 

Father Bear was right, Goldilocks was in the house. She walked in the kitchen and nearly slipped over “Goodness” she gasped, then she tip toed into the lounge, it was so defining Goldilocks nearly fainted “Gracious!” she shouted. Goldilocks cautiously crept up the stairs and into the bathroom. Suddenly the sink pipe burst and got Goldilocks wet “Oh-no!” she yelled. Soaked and grumpy, Goldilocks stumbled to the room the bears were. Meanwhile the bears hid behind the door, ready to scare Goldilocks. Goldilocks stumbled in “RAA!” roared the bears from behind the door, “AHHH!” screamed Goldilocks “HA! We’ve got revenge! Now you have got your house wrecked.” Snarled Father Bear, Goldilocks stared and started laughing “This isn’t my house!” she giggled “But I-s- saw you … and –oh!” stuttered Little Bear “No! This is the Big Bad Wolf’s house! I just came back to get my teddy bear!” cheered Goldilocks taking a teddy bear from the bed and ran off.

The bears left and went home hoping that the wolf wouldn’t find them, but they never saw one gold haired girl again.          

By Tauryn