Michelle's Narrative

The Three Bears and Goldilocks.

Once upon a time lived three bears there was a Baby Bear called Waima and a mummy named Lexie and lastly the biggest bear of all, the daddy bear Ryan.

One sunny morning the Mother Bear Lexie decided to have a walk in the Forrest. When they were walking some drips of rain started pouring gently down on them, so they quickly ran to shelter.

The first shelter they ran to was a little tiny cottage, as they waited for the pouring rain to stop they got hungrier and hungrier. Suddenly they smelt some delicious honey and toast and quick as a wink they rushed into the cottage and ate some sweet and tasty honey, and also spread honey all over the white toast. As they ate they grew sleepier and sleepier so they went to find a bed to sleep in.

At last they found a bed so they all tried very hard to fit on the bed. At last they all fell asleep. Suddenly……. Snap! The bed fell apart really badly, so the bears had to sleep on the cold, hard ground, of course they had blankets though. Then came the sound of a key. The bears woke up and listened properly they heard a creaky sound in the hallway, stomp! Stomp! Stomp! The father went to look so he took a sneak peek it was Goldilocks. Father Bear Ryan rushed in the room and told his wife Lexie and said “quick get up the chimney, Goldilocks’ coming!” so they rushed up the chimney.

First went the Mother Bear she jumped in the chimney and climbed her way out of it. Next it was Baby Bear Waima, she jumped and tried to climb up but she couldn’t so Mother Bear Lexie pulled her up. The footsteps of Goldilocks became louder and louder, she was coming close and closer so Father Bear panicked. He quickly jumped up the chimney hole but he couldn’t move, his bottom got stuck in the chimney! They heard the footsteps again Goldilocks was coming closer and closer but Father Bear Ryan still was stuck no matter what he did his bottom was still stuck! When Goldilocks almost got to that room suddenly a bee came out of nowhere and rushed up to Father Bear Ryan and……. Buzz! Buzz! Buzz! 

The bee stung Ryan the Father Bear. Father Bear Ryan came pouncing out of the chimney just as Goldilocks entered the room and said “who’s been sleeping on my bed and snapped it in half?” The three bears spied through the chimney to see what was going on but they saw Goldilocks’ burning red face. They quickly tried to jump down but Mother Bear Lexie realised something, they couldn’t get down! They tried to think but nothing got into their minds. Suddenly something popped into Mother Bears mind and she said “We can use the picnic blanket as a big parachute to float down” So Mother Bear Lexie gently floated down holding Baby Bear Waima in her arms and softly landed on the soft sands. The next thing Mother Bear did was to pass the picnic blanket to Father Bear Ryan. But as the picnic blanket got up halfway up it got stuck in a tall, brown, stiff, solid tree. Father Bear tried to jump up as high as he could but he couldn’t reach. It was no use it was way too high up for Father Bear to reach. “I….I …I’m …s..s..so …….t… t.. tired I.. I can’t… t.. t moo… moo… move “he said as he dropped and fell to the roof    Bang! Went the roof. Bang! Bang! Bang!

“What’s going on up there? “Cried Goldilocks so Goldilocks went to the roof outside but Father Bear was still knocked out. Then boom! Father Bear awakened and saw Goldilocks so he quickly tiptoed to the chimney and jumped down. Smack! But Father Bear got stuck again then out of nowhere out of the sky landed on Father Bear’s head clonk! Bonk! Donk! A big fat steel hammer, it knocked him out again! He smoothly floated down the chimney buutt smack!  Father Bear smacked his head on the wood in the chimney poor Father Bear he got a flat face.

When Father Bear heard Goldilocks come in, as quick as a flash Father Bear ran out the backdoor .slam! Went the door it had closed. Just as Goldilocks heard the loud slam she quickly ran inside leaving the door opened. Whoosh, whoosh the wind blew the door closed bang! “What was that?” said Goldilocks. Suddenly came a loud snort Goldilocks was deep asleep while Father Bear ran to Mother and Baby Bear and went home.

2 hours later… Goldilocks woke up and found herself in the hallway so she quickly ran to her bed. Suddenly a loud angry voice came out from Goldilocks so that the whole forest heard her “Who has snapped my bed in half!” as soon as the bears heard they quickly ran home sprinting as fast as the wind.

They never walked in the forest again and they lived happily ever after.

The End, By Michelle