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Friday 23 November 2012

Goldin and the three bad bears.


Goldin and the three bad bears.
Once on a bad thundering day there lived three bears named Alix Baby Bear, Markus Daddy Bear and Lulu Mummy Bear. They lived in the forest.

A  boy named Goldin was playing until it rained he was too far from his home when saw an cottage and he knocked on the door. No one was there so he just went in .He could smell yummy fish so he went and sat down on a baby sized chair ‘’To small’’ he said to himself. He tried Mummy Bears seat ‘’I can feel the ground I need a chair that can’t touch the ground!’’He yelled like mad

.He went up stairs to the bears beds in a angry mood .He lay on Daddy’s bed. ’Too cold’ ’so he tried Baby Bear’s ‘’My feet come of the bottom ‘’I like this person’s house”.

He  went down stairs because his tummy was rumbling .He  ate baby bears fish. “Too small” So he ate Daddy’s Bear fish. “Too yuck” So he ate Mummy’s Bears fish “Just right.” His tummy roared like a bear and he said “I think I need more food ”

He was standing in a dark shadow.He turned around slowly and he looked up at  sharp angry teeth! He looked at two big bold eyeS!He ran up stairs  with three bears chasing after him.He  hid under the beds he coluld see their feet .He thought and he said ‘Oh no bears can smell me!”Suddenly baby bear looked under the bed.

Goldin  ran out of the house back to the woods. In his home he said “If there is a house that is not locked run away”he said to his mum. 
By Nicole

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